 Grammar & wording  Literature review ◦ Goes too quickly to the study issue without situating it in the related research ◦ Insufficient review of the literature, causing the reviewer to note oversights & misunderstandings ◦ Personal definitions rather than giving attribution  Analysis & design ◦ Claims about results were problematic for the research design ◦ Sample size too small for the complexity and claims ◦ Causes and effects in the design not well addressed
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